Club in university & Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I entered IVF club in my university. There are a lot of good people. I want to be friend with them. So I applied this club. On wednesday we have a first meeting. At that time, we did many missions. The first mission is to take a picture about the card words. The second mission is that we have to won the Ping-Pong game. The third mission is having a dinner with senior. The last mission is running the park, doing some actions. It was cold and the game was not easy. But the missions were interesting and awesome. After playing the game, I am so tired. But I was happy because I met many friends and seniors and had the greatest time.
Howework - Do you think that there is anything worth dying for?
No, I don't think that there is anything worth dying. Because I think life is precious and vital.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you for sharing these things with me. I\'ll be very glaad to talk about it in the class. Enjoy your weekend.
-Teacher Faye
I entered IVF club in my University.
>>Correct
There are a lot of good people.
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I want to be a friend with them.
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So I applied this club.
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On wednesday we have a first meeting.
>>On Wednesday, we had our first meeting.
At that time, we did many missions.
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The first mission is to take a picture about the card words.
>>The firast mission was to take pictures of card words.
The second mission is that we have to won the Ping-Pong game.
>>The second mission was we had to win the pingpong game.
The third mission is having a dinner with senior.
>>The third mission was to have dinner with the Seiors.
The last mission is running the park, doing some actions.
>>The last mission was to run in the park while doing some activities.
It was cold and the game was not easy.
>>Correct
But the missions were interesting and awesome.
>>Correct
After playing the game, I am so tired.
>>After playing the game, I was very tired.
But I was happy because I met many friends and seniors and had the greatest time.
>>CorrectHowework - Do you think that there is anything worth dying for?
>>CorrectNo, I don\'t think that there is anything worth dying.
>>Correct
Because I think life is precious and vital.
>>Correct
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