coffee
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I like both bread and coffee too much .
When I scent of coffee, I feel relaxed and healed.
So When I choode coffee beans, I am a picky. I don\'t like the low quality of coffee beans like burnt smell, irregular size and too dark.
Except coffee, I am very plainly and ordinarily customer.
Even though when I buy clothes, I do regular shop and decide to promptly.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
I guess every one loves bread and coffee. They\'re best partners. Have I told you that in the Philippines, people start their day with a cup of coffee and bread. We have this Filipino bread called \"pandesal\" , it is a very simple bread but every one loves it. How bout you, is there a particular bread that you really love?
Aki~
Of course I like both bread and coffee too much .
>>> Correct!
When I scent of coffee, I feel relaxed and healed.
>>> Correct!
When I scent of coffee, I feel relaxed and healed.
>>> When I smell the aroma of the coffee, I feel relaxed and healed.
So When I choode coffee beans, I am a picky. I don\'t like the low quality of coffee beans like burnt smell, irregular size and too dark.
So When I choode coffee beans, I am a picky. I don\'t like the low quality of coffee beans like burnt smell, irregular size and too dark.
>>> So I am very picky when I choose coffee beans. I don;t like the low quality of coffee beans, burnt smell, irregular size and too dark.
Except coffee, I am very plainly and ordinarily customer.
Except coffee, I am very plainly and ordinarily customer.
>>> Except for the coffee, I am a very plain and an ordinary customer.
Even though when I buy clothes, I do regular shop and decide to promptly.
Even though when I buy clothes, I do regular shop and decide to promptly.
>>> Even in buying clothes, I regularly shop and decide promptly.
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