Coffee
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I don\'t think that coffee is a necessity or luxury in our modern life. But it is true that we are deeply influenced by coffee culture. When we meet someone, we naturally plan to get together at a coffee shop. On getting up, we prepare for morning coffee to wake up fully. After having lunch, we always enjoy drinking a cup of coffee. Now we can\'t go without drinking a cup of coffee. Those who are sensitive to caffeine like me feel dull without coffee culture.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree! Like you said in class, people like drinking coffee, but not to the point that it could be considered a necessity, since we could still avoid it. Still, our reliance on coffee when it comes to energy is evident, as we crave it to give us a boost to start our days.
- T. Caitlyn
I don\'t think that coffee is a necessity or luxury in our modern life.
>> CORRECT
But it is true that we are deeply influenced by coffee culture.
>> CORRECT
When we meet someone, we naturally plan to get together at a coffee shop.
>> CORRECT
On getting up, we prepare for morning coffee to wake up fully.
>> When we get up, we prepare morning coffee to fully wake up.
After having lunch, we always enjoy drinking a cup of coffee.
>> CORRECT
Now we can\'t go without drinking a cup of coffee.
>> CORRECT
Those who are sensitive to caffeine like me feel dull without coffee culture.
>> Those who are sensitive to caffeine, like me, feel dull without coffee.
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