coffee

2011-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

When it comes to beverage, I'm quite strict. I usually drink water, green tea, milk, juice and coffee. Among these things, I like coffee and drink it everyday. Without coffee, I can't start my day briskly. Sometimes I feel uncomfortable with my stomach but I can't stop having a cup of coffee everyday. I think I must be addicted to coffee.^^ My favorite is Americano. I enjoy it without sugar or cream. I like going to coffee shop with my friends and chatting with them. The price of a cup of coffee is expensive at the coffee shop like Starbucks, but I think we buy not only a cup of coffee but also the circumstances they provide for us.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! What a lovely Wednesday! ;) Thank you for sending me your composition. ;) I really appreciate it! I also love drinking coffee and chatting with my friends at a coffee shop! We share a common experience and that's very good! Have a great day and See you later ;) -Teacher Joanna When it comes to beverage, I'm quite strict. >> When it comes to beverages, I'm quite strict. I usually drink water, green tea, milk, juice and coffee.>>Correct ^^ Among these things, I like coffee and drink it everyday. >> Among these things, I like coffee the most and drink it everyday. Without coffee, I can't start my day briskly. >>Correct ^^Sometimes I feel uncomfortable with my stomach but I can't stop having a cup of coffee everyday. >> Sometimes I feel uncomfortable on my stomach but I can't stop having a cup of coffee everyday. I think I must be addicted to coffee.^^>>Correct ^^ My favorite is Americano. >> My favorite coffee is Americano. I enjoy it without sugar or cream.>> I enjoy drinking it without sugar or cream.I like going to coffee shop with my friends and chatting with them. >> I like going to coffee shops  with my friends and also chatting with them. The price of a cup of coffee is expensive at the coffee shop like Starbucks, but I think we buy not only a cup of coffee but also the circumstances they provide for us. >> The price of a cup of coffee is expensive at the coffee shop like Starbucks but I think we  don’t only buy a cup of coffee but also the circumstances they provide for us.  

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