Coffee
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I like coffee very much.
I think I'm addicted in the caffeine.
I drink 2 or 3 cups of coffee a day.
I usually drink it in the early morning or after lunch, and then I feel rested and awaked.
According to the article which I read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee in a day can prevent the heart desease.
I think the Caramel Macchiato and Caffe Mocha is good.
The reason I like Carmel Macchiato is that the flavor of Carmel is nice.
The Macchiato means the whipping milk cream on the coffee, and it is very soft.
Also, I like Caffe Mocha because of its sweetness.
The Mocha means the blend of espresso and chololete.
Nowadays, I hesitate to drink it because it makes me fat.
Americano dosen't taste good, however, I think it tastes like a drugs.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Good job with this one. I think you were able to write good sentences. You just need to be careful with the spelling of the words. J Enjoy drinking coffee! J
- Teacher Faye
I like coffee very much.
>>CORRECTI think I'm addicted in the caffeine.
>> I think I뭢 addicted to the caffeine.I drink 2 or 3 cups of coffee a day.
>>CORRECTI usually drink it in the early morning or after lunch, and then I feel rested and awaked.
>> I usually drink it early in the morning or after lunch and then I would feel rested and awakened.According to the article which I read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee in a day can prevent the heart desease.
>>According to the article which I have read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee a day can prevent heart disease.I think the Caramel Macchiato and Caffe Mocha is good.
>> I think Caramel Macchiato and Caf
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