Coffee

2011-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I like coffee very much. I think I'm addicted in the caffeine. I drink 2 or 3 cups of coffee a day. I usually drink it in the early morning or after lunch, and then I feel rested and awaked. According to the article which I read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee in a day can prevent the heart desease. I think the Caramel Macchiato and Caffe Mocha is good. The reason I like Carmel Macchiato is that the flavor of Carmel is nice. The Macchiato means the whipping milk cream on the coffee, and it is very soft. Also, I like Caffe Mocha because of its sweetness. The Mocha means the blend of espresso and chololete. Nowadays, I hesitate to drink it because it makes me fat. Americano dosen't taste good, however, I think it tastes like a drugs.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good job with this one. I think you were able to write good sentences. You just need to be careful with the spelling of the words. J Enjoy drinking coffee! J -       Teacher Faye   I like coffee very much. >>CORRECTI think I'm addicted in the caffeine. >> I think I뭢 addicted to the caffeine.I drink 2 or 3 cups of coffee a day. >>CORRECTI usually drink it in the early morning or after lunch, and then I feel rested and awaked. >> I usually drink it early in the morning or after lunch and then I would feel rested and awakened.According to the article which I read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee in a day can prevent the heart desease. >>According to the article which I have read yesterday, drinking a cup of coffee a day can prevent heart disease.I think the Caramel Macchiato and Caffe Mocha is good. >> I think Caramel Macchiato and Caf

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