Coffee I\'m into

2020-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I’ve recently learned how to make coffee at home and decided to make it for myself. First of all, I needed to prepare a coffee machine and a powder of coffee. And hot water or maybe some milk needs to be prepared. When I started for the first time, I hadn’t checked how much water and coffee powder were enough. Then, I saw the need. Three spoons of coffee into a cup of water, that’s it. It was even easier than I thought it would be so I feel uncomfortable as if I skipped one of the step of the recipe. It tasted and smelled as good as I expected. and I got into it. But it’s not the one that’s been catching on lately, called ‘달고나 coffee’.

강사 첨삭

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 Thank you so much for submitting this essay and homework.

It is very insightful and well-written. Please check the corrections and if you have questions regarding them, ask me in class.

T. Jeny



I’ve recently learned how to make coffee at home and decided to make it for myself.
>>correct
First of all, I needed to prepare a coffee machine and a powder of coffee.
>>First of all, I needed to prepare a coffee machine and powder of coffee.
And hot water or maybe some milk needs to be prepared.
>>And hot water or maybe I need to prepare some milk.

When I started for the first time, I hadn’t checked how much water and coffee powder were enough.
>>correct
>OR>When I started for the first time, I didn’t check how much water and coffee powder were enough.
Then, I saw the need.
>>correct
Three spoons of coffee into a cup of water, that’s it.
>>correct
It was even easier than I thought it would be so I feel uncomfortable as if I skipped one of the step of the recipe.
>>It was even easier than I thought it would be so I felt uncomfortable as if I skipped one of the steps from the recipe.
It tasted and smelled as good as I expected. and I got into it.
>>correct

But it’s not the one that’s been catching on lately, called ‘달고나 coffee’
>>But it’s not the one that’s been catching on lately, called Dalgona coffee’ 

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