Coffee shops
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There are several kinds of coffee shops in Korea: STARBUCKS, A TWOSOME PLACE, EDIYA COFFEE.
There are various kinds of menus such as coffee, tea, bread, ice cream, sandwiches.
Many people are using there as a place to talk.
Despite Corona 19, we can see many people are gathering and talking for a long time.
I also go there to meet people.
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I hope you\'re always careful when you go out.
Take care of yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are several kinds of coffee shops in Korea: STARBUCKS, A TWOSOME PLACE, EDIYA COFFEE.
>> Correct
There are various kinds of menus such as coffee, tea, bread, ice cream, sandwiches.
There are various kinds of menus such as coffee, tea, bread, ice cream, sandwiches.
>> There are various kinds of items on the menu such as coffee, tea, bread, ice cream and sandwiches.
Many people are using there as a place to talk.
Many people are using there as a place to talk.
>> Many people treat this as a place to talk.
Despite Corona 19, we can see many people are gathering and talking for a long time.
Despite Corona 19, we can see many people are gathering and talking for a long time.
>> Despite COVID19, we can see many people gather and talk there for a long time.
I also go there to meet people.
I also go there to meet people.
>> Correct
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