Cold weather is lingering after snow today.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kristine,
How are you doing today so far?
According to weather forcast , we are blanked in high levels of ultrafine dust today. when I went out today I felt air is stuffy and dry. I was thinking that I would better wear cov-19 mask again. When I came back to home, I drunk hot ginger tea.^^
Thank you for your detail corrections. It helps me encouraged a lot.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/11:
Writing Task: How do you judge food? By taste, appearance, smell, or feel? Can food be delicious if it looks terrible?
I would say that I personally judge food by smell first. I am a kind of person who is sensitive with food smell.
If food looks terrible, well , I can\'t have any appetite with that.
but I think it could be delicious. I remembered the steamed bug\'s eggs that I had eatten when I was young. Actually I don\'t eat those anymore. Those bug\'s eggs was delicious.
*** I am always wondering and don\'t know about the phrases with Rather than. so I am suggesting we could talk about this in the class.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
I\'m doing pretty well. I think it\'s better to wear a mask nowadays due to fine dust. Take care of yourself!
- Kristine ^^
Hi Kristine,
How are you doing today so far?
How are you doing today so far?
>> Correct.
According to weather forcast , we are blanked in high levels of ultrafine dust today.
According to weather forcast , we are blanked in high levels of ultrafine dust today.
>> The weather forecast indicates that we will be covered with ultrafine dust today.
when I went out today I felt air is stuffy and dry.
>> The air felt dry and stuffy when I stepped outside today.
I was thinking that I would better wear cov-19 mask again.
>> I was thinking that it would be best to wear the COVID-19 mask again
When I came back to home, I drunk hot ginger tea.^^
>> I drank hot ginger tea when I got home. ^^
Thank you for your detail corrections. It helps me encouraged a lot.
Thank you for your detail corrections. It helps me encouraged a lot.
>> I appreciate your detailed corrections. It greatly encourages me.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/11:
Writing Task: How do you judge food? By taste, appearance, smell, or feel? Can food be delicious if it looks terrible?
I would say that I personally judge food by smell first.
HOMEWORK FOR 01/11:
Writing Task: How do you judge food? By taste, appearance, smell, or feel? Can food be delicious if it looks terrible?
I would say that I personally judge food by smell first.
>> Correct.
I am a kind of person who is sensitive with food smell.
>> I am the kind of person who is sensitive to the smell of food.
If food looks terrible, well , I can\'t have any appetite with that. but I think it could be delicious.
If food looks terrible, well , I can\'t have any appetite with that. but I think it could be delicious.
>> Although I don\'t have an appetite for food that looks bad, it can still be tasty.
I remembered the steamed bug\'s eggs that I had eatten when I was young.
>> I still remember eating the steamed bug\'s eggs when I was young.
Actually I don\'t eat those anymore.
>> To be honest, I never longer eat those.
Those bug\'s eggs was delicious.
>> Those bug\'s eggs were delicious.
*** I am always wondering and don\'t know about the phrases with Rather than. so I am suggesting we could talk about this in the class.
*** I am always wondering and don\'t know about the phrases with Rather than. so I am suggesting we could talk about this in the class.
>> *** I\'m curious about the phrase \"Rather than.\" So I\'m thinking we should discuss this in class.
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