collecting
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In the future I want to collect magnets of each countries. The benefits of collecting is that I\'m able to skim the past experiences. For example, I can look back which places I\'ve been while looking coins. In a same context, I try to understand people who collecting strange things. Unless the things are illegal or give bad effects to others, it should be admitted.
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Hannah,
Thanks for sharing your ideas about collection.
-Teacher Ash
In the future I want to collect magnets of each countries.
>> In the future, I want to collect fridge magnets from other countries.
The benefits of collecting is that I\'m able to skim the past experiences.
>> The benefit of collecting is that I\'m able to skim through my past experiences.
For example, I can look back which places I\'ve been while looking coins.
>> For example, I can look back to the places I\'ve been while looking at the coins.
In a same context, I try to understand people who collecting strange things.
>> In the same context, I try to understand people who collect strange things.
Unless the things are illegal or give bad effects to others, it should be admitted.
>> As long as the actions are not illegal or harmful, then they ought to be accepted.
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