Collection
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1. Why do you think people like vintage stuff?
It has unique and antique attraction. Maybe people like that.
2. What do you collect or what collections do you want to have and why?
I have collected comic books. I like comic and I have seen favorate comic books over and over. To addition, I don\'t like rental of books becuase they are not safe from virus and bacteria.
Have a good time!
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
It has unique and antique attraction.
>>CORRECT!
Maybe people like that.
>>CORRECT!
I have collected comic books.
>>CORRECT!
I like comic and I have seen favorate comic books over and over.
>> I like comic and I have seen favorates comic books over and over.
To addition, I don\'t like rental of books becuase they are not safe from virus and bacteria.
>> To addition, I don\'t like rental of books because they are not safe from virus and bacteria.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.