\'collective intelligence\'
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that somone do something together with others is better t[이름] doing by oneself. Because even smartest person can\'t win the power of \'collective intelligence\'
강사 첨삭
Good day to you MS. Rachel! I appreciate your effort of being diligent every day especially learning the language enthusiastically. Keep yourself focused and soon enough you\'ll hit your target! Have a great day~!^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think that somone do something together with others is better t[이름] doing by oneself.
>>> I believe that working together with others is better t[이름] doing things alone.
Because even the smartest person can\'t win the power of \'collective intelligence\'.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
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