Color Black and Associating with
학생이 쓴 원문
I like wearing black color trousers and a suit of black color clothes at the wedding.
I would like to associate with young people according to aging.
I don\'t associate with the color black of long shirts, but associating with
the color blue of T- shirts in the garden during the walking alone.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for the effort today.
I look forward to your other compositions.
Have a great day!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like wearing black color trousers and a suit of black color clothes at the wedding.
>> I like wearing black-colored trousers and a black suit for weddings.
I would like to associate with young people according to aging.
I would like to associate with young people according to aging.
>> I would like to follow the trends of younger people.
I don\'t associate with the color black of long shirts, but associating with the color blue of T- shirts in the garden during the walking alone.
I don\'t associate with the color black of long shirts, but associating with the color blue of T- shirts in the garden during the walking alone.
>> I can\'t really relate to long black shirts but I like wearing blue T-shirts whenever I go walking alone in the garden.
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