comfort and fashion style
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer fashion style. I care a lot about myself being seen by others, and I also care about how I see myself outside the car window or mirror. Of course, I seek comfort, but I prefer fashion style.
강사 첨삭
I prefer fashion style.
>> I prefer fashionable style.
I care a lot about myself being seen by others, and I also care about how I see myself outside the car window or mirror.
>> I care a lot about how others see me, and I also care about how I see myself in a mirror or in reflections outside, like in a car window.
Of course, I seek comfort, but I prefer fashion style.
>> CORRECT (a bit unnatural)
OR >> Of course, I also value comfort, but I still prefer a fashionable style.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.