comic
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In Korea,I think comics are popular because there are pictures.And because some times funny pictures makes us laugh.And because the picture shows what happend in the comic.
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>>In Korea, I think comics are popular because there are pictures.
And because some times funny pictures makes us laugh.
>>And because sometimes, funny pictures make us laugh.
And because the picture shows what happend in the comic.
>>And because, the pictures show what happened in the comic.
OR>>And because, the pictures show what is happening in the story.
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