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2017-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Hello, How do you feel today? That's not too bad. But these day, i am so boring. I should find a new hobby something fun. Can you recommend something to do? How about to read a comics? I heard that "Outdoor Adventures" is very fun. I know that comics. Do you happen to have the latest issue of it? It may come out monthly. I saw the new one around this time of the month in the book shop where is across our store. I don't have it. I just borrow it from a library. And it might be came in yet. Ok, If you see the latest issue, please call me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

 Whoa! Your sentences are getting better. Remember agreement, tenses, and word order.^^
Never stop aiming high!
Have a great day!

~Teacher Eunice


Hello, How do you feel today?
>> Correct!
>> Hello, how are you feeling today?
 That\'s not too bad.
>> I\'m feeling good today.
 But these day, i am so boring.
>> I feel bored these past few days.
 I should find a new hobby something fun.
>> I should start a new hobby just for fun.
 Can you recommend something to do?
>> Correct!
>> Can you recommend some sports to do?
 How about to read a comics?
>> How about reading a comics?
 I heard that \"Outdoor Adventures\" is very fun.
>> I heard that \"Outdoor Adventures\" is very funny.
 I know that comics.
>> Correct!
>> I\'ve heard of that comics.
 Do you happen to have the latest issue of it?
>> Correct!
 It may come out monthly.
>> They release some series monthly.
I saw the new one around this time of the month in the book shop where is across our store.
>> I saw the new one around this time of the month in the book shop across our store.
 I don\'t have it. I just borrow it from a library. And it might be came in yet.
>> I don\'t have it, I just borrow it from the library and I might be returning the comics book.
 Ok, If you see the latest issue, please call me.
>> All right, If you see the latest issue please call me.

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