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학생이 쓴 원문
The weekend is coming, and the week is gone.
It's HOT Friday today. It's also the best wether condition today.
Sweet winds and proper sun shining make me smile.
The oldest professor in my undergraduate school said to all students in Facebook like this, "Enjoy your vocation like being on vacation.". It means 'Carpe diem.' in your life. After I knew this sentense, I started to enjoy feeling tired. Becase I was working on vacation. It's my vocation.
This moment that I nid-nod is also happy. Even if I feel strain on my neck's back, I am happy.
I think I'm the happiest person in the world because I'm really happy.
Hope you have a great weekend, Nica. Bye -
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강사 첨삭
TGIF! I\'m happy that you experienced a good weather today. I hope we will also have a good weather tomorrow and the rain will stop. Life is really hard but if you enjoy it, you will not feel tired. Have a good weekend! I\'ll talk to you again soon.
_T. Nica_
Here are the corrections:
The weekend is coming, and the week is gone.
>>Its weekend again and another weekdays has passed.It\'s HOT Friday today.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>The weather is hot today.
It\'s also the best wether condition today.
>>However, its also the best weather condition.Sweet winds and proper sun shining make me smile.
>>The wind is cool, the sunshine is just right and it makes me smile.The oldest professor in my undergraduate school said to all students in Facebook like this, \"Enjoy your vocation like being on vacation.\".
>>The oldest professor in my undergraduate school had a shout out to all the students in Facebook saying \"Enjoy your vocation like being on a vacation.\"
It means \'Carpe diem.\' in your life.
>>It means carpe diem.
After I knew this sentense, I started to enjoy feeling tired.
>>When I saw this shout out I stared to enjoy life even if I\'m tired.
Becase I was working on vacation.
>>Because I work during vacations.
It\'s my vocation.
>>CORRECTThis moment that I nid-nod is also happy.
>>Even if I nid-nod I\'m still happy.
Even if I feel strain on my neck\'s back, I am happy.
>>I am happy even if I have a back strain.I think I\'m the happiest person in the world because I\'m really happy.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>I\'m really happy so I guess I\'m the happiest person in the world.Hope you have a great weekend, Nica.
>> CORRECT
Bye
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