commit corruption
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When the school principal commit corruption in school, he(she) is punished by the National Public Service Act.
The worst crimes as a principal are test fabrication and sexual harassment.
Punishment are various depending on the crime.
Sometimes he does not take pension after retirement.
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Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this information. I am quite satisfied with the last part on how they get their punishment. We call it a \"deserved\" punishment.
If people are aware of the consequences of the crime they are about to do, this will make them think twice. Unless that person does not have any conscience at all.
Aki~
When the school principal commit corruption in school, he(she) is punished by the National Public Service Act.
>> When the school principal commits corruption in school, he(she) is punished by the National Public Service Act.
The worst crimes as a principal are test fabrication and sexual harassment.
>> CORRECT!
Punishment are various depending on the crime.
>> Punishments are various depending on the crime.
Sometimes he does not take pension after retirement.
>> Sometimes he wouldn\'t have a pension after retirement.
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