Communicate in the future

2016-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Everyone has a five greed. Five greed is appetite, sexuality, riches, fame, sleep. Human greed is endless. Future greed should add that. That is called six greed. Every human wants to know their future. How do you know a future? Nonoe knows perfect future. Everyone just imagine. It can be through in communication with God and talking by himself, predicting correctly the reality. We can't see communition with God. That is beyond the human being. The best way is that predicting correctly the reality. The past is the current a mirror, and now a mirror of the futrue. The futrue is reflect a present. We can predict the future the only that should watch the different perspective of the reality.It can be through the big data and the smart robot or machine, and the social phenomenia. But it is probably right or wrong. Nobody could predict the result. It is one clear thing. Do your best the present, so then you will get a bright future. That is the best way that communicate with the future.

강사 첨삭

Hello sir!

Welcome back!

How was your trip? I hope it was a fruitful one that you were able to collect as much information as you needed. I think human greed is inborn. What we could only do is to try controlling it with our might. Or to somehow turn it into something positive. I guess you are right because humans are greedy to know the future so it has been done in the past and will also be done in the future. See you later sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Everyone has a five greed.

>>Everyone has five greed.

Five greed is appetite, sexuality, riches, fame, sleep.

>>The five greed are appetite, sexuality, riches, fame and sleep.

Human greed is endless.

>>correct!

Future greed should add that.

>>Future greed should be added to that.

OR>> Greed to see/know the future should be added to that.

That is called six greed.

>>That is the sixth greed.

Every human wants to know their future.

>>correct!

How do you know a future? Nonoe knows perfect future.

>>How do you know the future? No one knows perfectly the future.

Everyone just imagine.

>>correct!

It can be through in communication with God and talking by himself, predicting correctly the reality.

>>It can be through communication with God and talking to Him yourself, then you can predict correctly the reality.

We can\'t see communition with God.

>> We can\'t see God to communicate with Him.

That is beyond the human being.

>>correct!

The best way is that predicting correctly the reality.

>>correct!

The past is the current a mirror, and now a mirror of the futrue.

>>The past is the now\'s mirror, and the now is the mirror of the future.

The futrue is reflect a present.

>>The future is the reflection of the present.

We can predict the future the only that should watch the different perspective of the reality.

>>We can predict the future only by watching the different perspective of reality.

It can be through the big data and the smart robot or machine, and the social phenomena.

>>correct!

But it is probably right or wrong.

>>correct!

Nobody could predict the result.

>>correct!

It is one clear thing.

>>One thing is clear.

Do your best the present, so then you will get a bright future.

>>Do your best in the present then you will get a brighter future.

That is the best way that communicate with the future.

>>That is the best way to communicate to the future.

 

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