Communicating
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Debby. :)
Thank you for saying that. I always keep looking if there are any question I want to ask. If I have, I will ask you. :)
By the way, can you give me some advice for communicating with foreginers?
I want to know what they like and don't like.
Have a good day~ :)
<Essay>
I'm not in any position. If we get a hurt in face due to accident or trauma, a plastic surgery will be needed. But I don't agree with plastic surgery just for beauty, though they are beautiful enough.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Thank you for your kind words.^^
I\'m open for your questions just do not ask me about the future because I\'m not a fortune teller. hahahaha
Kidding aside, I\'m open minded with you because your are the same.
From my experience, talking to foreigners is easy if you are confident. Do not show them that you
are nervous. They can feel that.
Try this for Westerners.
1. Greet them with a question like: How are you doing today? What\'s up with you today?
Start a conversation like you are interested about them.
2. Make a compliment! example: You look great today! Nice shirt you\'re wearing today!
[girls like this a lot.hahahaha]
3. Ask them back what they asked you after you answer it. This would make them feel like you want to know them better.
example: I would like to have Japanese food today. How about you? what would you like?
4. Give a choice and ask the reason. example: Do you like summer better or winter? Why is that?
5. LISTEN TO WHO YOU\'RE TALKING TO. :)
Hope I helped you.
Good luck! ^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my correction for you:
Hi~ Debby. :)
>> Hello Debby^^
Thank you for saying that.
>> CORRECT
OR> I appreciate what you said.^^
I always keep looking if there are any question I want to ask.
>> I keep looking if there are any questions I want to ask.
[always and keep on would mean the same thing that you do not stop, use only one and use the plural for questions since you used the word \"any\"]
If I have, I will ask you. :)
>> CORRECT
OR> If I thought of something, I will tell you.^^By the way, can you give me some advice for communicating with foreginers?
>> CORRECT
OR> Do you have tips on how to communicate with foreigners?I want to know what they like and don\'t like.>> CORRECT
OR> I want to know their likes and dislikes.Have a good day~ :)
>> CORRECT
OR> Have a great day. ^^<Essay>I\'m not in any position.
>> CORRECT
OR> I do not have a side.
If we get a hurt in face due to accident or trauma, a plastic surgery will be needed.
>> If we get a hurt in the face due to an accident or trauma, a plastic surgery will be needed.
[use your articles \"the\" and \"an\"]
But I don\'t agree with plastic surgery just for beauty, though they are beautiful enough.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m not into the idea of surgery just for the sake of beauty, but they are already pretty enough.
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