Community centers
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In my opinion, community centers should improve their programs or courses for residents to attract more people. They should also increase the classes that are popular among applicants. I wanted to attend a swimming class and tried to apply for a beginner\'s class, but I failed to enroll because of severe competition. I want to the community centers to offer a variety of courses and increase popular classes.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I strongly agree that the government should invest more in community centers in Korea, especially because of the aging population. A lot of elderly people need more activities to maintain their health, and community centers can help them do that at a minimal cost.
- T. Caitlyn
In my opinion, community centers should improve their programs or courses for residents to attract more people.
>> CORRECT
They should also increase the classes that are popular among applicants.
>> CORRECT
I wanted to attend a swimming class and tried to apply for a beginner\'s class, but I failed to enroll because of severe competition.
>> CORRECT
I want to the community centers to offer a variety of courses and increase popular classes.
>> I want the community centers to offer a variety of courses and increase the number of popular classes.
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