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2012-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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If you have only 24 hours to live, what will you do?^^ Oh, It had a two type exist. first just for me, I will use a rest time for me. but everyone had a like that time i will study like my friend. P.S I'm so sad for theacher will get out company. i want theacer in the company more.

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear [이름]! .^__^. Wow, I never heard that kind of answer before. You are really unique and amazing. Well, I wonder why did you choose to study instead of hanging out with your friend, kkkk. Well,  it\'s hard to say when our life will end. It will be unpredictable and maybe shocking. My dear [이름], it is so hard for me to say goodbye to you. I am honestly very very sad right now. You have become a big part of my life. The first days we had were very nerve wracking, I couldn\'t forget that we had a petty fight during that time. But after that, everything turned out right. I am really thankful for all the good memories we had together. You made me laugh crazily and you were always diligent. I hope that you will continuously do the same thing you did in our class. I want you to be happy with your new teacher on Monday. No worries, I believe she will also be very funny just like you.^^ I\'ll see you later my dear [이름]^^ Have a wonderful evening for now.~ Janette~ If you have only 24 hours to live, what will you do?^^ >>CORRECTOh, It had a two type exist. >>Oh, I\'ve got two answers.first just for me, I will use a rest time for me. >>First, I will use the remaining time to rest.but everyone had a like that time i will study like my friend. >>Second, I will study like my friend.P.SI\'m so sad for theacher will get out company. >>I\'m so sad for teacher that she will leave the company.i want theacer in the company more. >>I want my teacher to stay in the company longer.

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