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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name].
Hello~
It was really nice talking to you!
Specially,Today's topic was very good!
President No was too young to do task of president.
Actually The age is very very important to somthing do in Korea.
I would like to talk about president No tomorrow.
Nowhere be found the president who kill himself in the earth.
Anyway my dear Camille.
As you know I'm wearing braces to straighten my teeth.
I went to dental hospital tonight. And Braces was tighted
So I will feel pain tomorrow and I will can't easily eat food.
Oh~~~~~ Tomorrow is birthday of my coworker.
We will go to family restaurant and we will order the stak.
Oh my god!!!
It's a terroble!!!
Ms. [Name]. Time to go to the bed.
See you tomorrow and enjoy night!!!
Bye Bye
Bella.
강사 첨삭
My dear Bella,^^
It is so nice receiving a composition from you..
I really love reading your compositions because your ideas are very impressive!I commend you for a job well done..
Anyway, Im still hoping you could eat a lot on your friend's brthday...kkk..
See you again tomorrow my dear...
Goodnight!
T.Cam^^
Dear [Name]. [Name].Hello~It was really nice talking to you!
>>correct!Specially,Today's topic was very good!
>>correct!President No was too young to do task of president.
>>President No was too young to be a president.
Actually The age is very very important to somthing do in Korea.
>>Actually, age is very important in Korea.I would like to talk about president No tomorrow.
>>correct!Nowhere be found the president who kill himself in the earth.
>>Nowhere to be found a presidnt who will killed himself.Anyway my dear Camille.
>>correct!As you know I'm wearing braces to straighten my teeth.
>>correct!I went to dental hospital tonight. And Braces was tighted
>>I went to the hospital and they tighten my braces.So I will feel pain tomorrow and I will can't easily eat food.
>>So for sure, tomorrow, it'll be very painful and it wont be easy for me to eat.Oh~~~~~ Tomorrow is birthday of my coworker.
>>Oh...tomorrow is my co-worker's birthday!We will go to family restaurant and we will order the stak.
>>We will try to go to a family restaurant and order some steak.Oh my god!!!
>>correct!It's a terroble!!!
>>Its terrible!Ms. [Name]. Time to go to the bed.
>>correct!See you tomorrow and enjoy night!!!
>>See you tomorrow and enjoy your evening!!Bye ByeBella.
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