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One of my sisters is a businessman couple.
They are in charge of electrical construction and electrical design.
At the beginning of its establishment, it consisted of three members, but now has two bosses and many employees.
As a result of their hard work, my sister and her husband run two electric-related companies.
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Hi [이름] Ha!
I bet your sister has an interesting lifestyle.
Let\'s talk more about her.
You can tell me more about her challenges and successes.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
One of my sisters is a businessman couple.
>> One of my sisters is part of a business couple.
They are in charge of electrical construction and electrical design.
They are in charge of electrical construction and electrical design.
>> Correct
At the beginning of its establishment, it consisted of three members, but now has two bosses and many employees.
At the beginning of its establishment, it consisted of three members, but now has two bosses and many employees.
>> In the beginning of its establishment, it consisted of three members, but now has two bosses and many employees.
As a result of their hard work, my sister and her husband run two electric-related companies.
As a result of their hard work, my sister and her husband run two electric-related companies.
>> Correct
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