Company life
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I work closely with many different people who have diffrent personalities and are from diffrent locations.
Though we are all dirrerent , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation.
The closer I am with my coworker , the easier I can work.
So I try to get close with my coworkers by giving them a joke or having a dinner with them.
I don't like someone who shows off himself.
But there is always a guy who does that.
When I meet him , I avoid talking with him coz I don't wanna get stressed.
and there is an another guy whom I hate.
Who doesn't want to share his knowledge in work place.
When I ask something , It seems he doesn't want to tell me what he knows.
I think he is afraid that I will surpass his ability.
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I work closely with many different people who have diffrent personalities and are from diffrent locations.
>>correct!
Though we are all dirrerent , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation.
>>Though we are all different , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation.
The closer I am with my coworker , the easier I can work.
>>correct!
>>The closer I am with my coworkers, the easier I work with them.
So I try to get close with my coworkers by giving them a joke or having a dinner with them.
>>correct!
I don't like someone who shows off himself.
>>correct!
>>I hate someone who is boastful.
But there is always a guy who does that.
>>But there is always someone who does that.
When I meet him , I avoid talking with him coz I don't wanna get stressed.
>>correct!
and there is an another guy whom I hate.
>>correct!
Who doesn't want to share his knowledge in work place.
>>He doesnt want to share his knowledge in workplace.
When I ask something , It seems he doesn't want to tell me what he knows.
>>correct!
I think he is afraid that I will surpass his ability.
>>correct!
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