Company life

2011-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I work closely with many different people who have diffrent personalities and are from diffrent locations. Though we are all dirrerent , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation. The closer I am with my coworker , the easier I can work. So I try to get close with my coworkers by giving them a joke or having a dinner with them. I don't like someone who shows off himself. But there is always a guy who does that. When I meet him , I avoid talking with him coz I don't wanna get stressed. and there is an another guy whom I hate. Who doesn't want to share his knowledge in work place. When I ask something , It seems he doesn't want to tell me what he knows. I think he is afraid that I will surpass his ability.

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Hello there my dear [이름], Thank you so much for dropping in your composition.. Job well done on your composition my dear.. I'll talk to you later my dear.. Teacher Camille   I work closely with many different people who have diffrent personalities and are from diffrent locations. >>correct! Though we are all dirrerent , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation. >>Though we are all different , we try to get along with each other by having a conversation. The closer I am with my coworker , the easier I can work. >>correct! >>The closer I am with my coworkers, the easier I work with them. So I try to get close with my coworkers by giving them a joke or having a dinner with them. >>correct! I don't like someone who shows off himself. >>correct! >>I hate someone who is boastful. But there is always a guy who does that. >>But there is always someone who does that. When I meet him , I avoid talking with him coz I don't wanna get stressed. >>correct! and there is an another guy whom I hate. >>correct! Who doesn't want to share his knowledge in work place. >>He doesnt want to share his knowledge in workplace. When I ask something , It seems he doesn't want to tell me what he knows. >>correct! I think he is afraid that I will surpass his ability. >>correct!

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