Company life
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Company needs to listen to employee's voice.
>>correct!
>>Companies need to listen to their employees' voice
And respect it as fas as possible.
>>And respect it as much as possible.
and When someone makes a conflict in a company, Company needs to give him a disadvntage.
>>When there are conflicts in a company, the company needs to give them a reprimand.
If someguys fight in company, their boss report is to HR department.
>>If some people have disagreements in a company, their boss must report it to the HR department.
and they will have a disadvantage for their promotion.
>>and this may be a hindrance for their promotion.
I had a argument with one of my coworkers few years ago.
>>I had an argument with one of my co-workers a few years ago.
Since I was so angry, I insulted her with angry voice.
>>Since I was so angry, I insulted her angrily.
Suddenly she got out of company with criying.
>>Suddenly, she went out of the company crying.
This incident became known to my boss.
>>My boss knew this incident.
and I got scolded by him.
>>correct!
>>and he scolded me.
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