Company location

2010-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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My company is located in a country. So all I can see around my company is nature. and I live near my company. Since it takes only 5 minutes to get there from my house, I mostly walk to commute. and my work time is changable. So I commute at different time depending on the shift.

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Great job [이름]! No further problems or corrections noted... I just want you to continue what youre doing.. Im really proud of you..;) Talk to you again later my dear... T.Cam   My company is located in a country. >>correct! >>My company is located in a rural area->> betterSo all I can see around my company is nature. >>correct!and I live near my company. >>correct!Since it takes only 5 minutes to get there from my house, >>correct!I mostly walk to commute. >>I usually walk to get there.and my work time is changable. >>And my work schedule is usually changing.So I commute at different time depending on the shift. >>correct!

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