Company location
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My company is located in a country.
So all I can see around my company is nature.
and I live near my company.
Since it takes only 5 minutes to get there from my house,
I mostly walk to commute.
and my work time is changable.
So I commute at different time depending on the shift.
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My company is located in a country.
>>correct!
>>My company is located in a rural area->> betterSo all I can see around my company is nature.
>>correct!and I live near my company.
>>correct!Since it takes only 5 minutes to get there from my house,
>>correct!I mostly walk to commute.
>>I usually walk to get there.and my work time is changable.
>>And my work schedule is usually changing.So I commute at different time depending on the shift.
>>correct!
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