company meeting

2020-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

I attend as much as possible. Even if it`s a small meeting, I try to attend. I didn`t know when I was young that relationships with people are important. Each person has some natural ability for efficient handling of work. There is a limit to their efforts. In the end, everyone can`t do well So whether it`s a group that it doesn`t help or doesn`t want to go I attend. The contents of meetings are important and the relationship with people is important.

강사 첨삭

Good day Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work. See you in class!

Here are your corrections:

I attend as much as possible.
>> CORRECT

Even if it`s a small meeting, I try to attend.
>> CORRECT

I didn`t know when I was young that relationships with people are important.
>> CORRECT

Each person has some natural ability for efficient handling of work.
>> Each person has their unique ability to efficiently handle their work.

There is a limit to their efforts.
>> CORRECT

In the end, everyone can`t do well
>> CORRECT

So whether it`s a group that it doesn`t help or doesn`t want to go I attend.
>> So whether it\'s the group that doesn\'t help or doesn\'t wnat to go, I still attend.

The contents of meetings are important and the relationship with people is important.
>> The contents of the meetings are important and the relationship with people is important too.

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