Company rules

2020-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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We have rules not smoking in front of the Customers and even though boss. But sometimes new coworkers smoking in this situation. In past time i have coworkers in koreans. Now in other countries people. so i want to talk to them You are not allowed here in smoking. becase it\' Seemmd to not politely. If you want smoke without area customers and boss. Don\'t call you someone working time . because .it\'s dangerous They are Young generation . had been So often calls someone and all they long called Strong point has powerful

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We have rules not smoking in front of the Customers and even though boss.

>> We have a \"No Smoking\" rule when we are in front of our customers and even bosses are not exempted.
But sometimes new coworkers smoking in this situation. 

>> But sometimes, my new coworkers still smoke and violate this rule.

In past time i have coworkers in koreans. Now in other countries people.  so i want to talk to them 

>> In the past, I\'ve only had Korean coworkers but now, I have foreign coworkers so I want to talk to them.  
You are not allowed here in smoking. becase it\' Seemmd to not politely.

>> I want to tell then that they are not allowed to smoke her because it does not seem polite.
If you want smoke without area customers and boss. 

>> If you want smoke, don\'t do it in front of our customers and boss. 
Don\'t call you someone working time . because .it\'s dangerous 

>> Don\'t do it during your working time because it\'s dangerous 
They are Young generation . had been So often calls someone and all they long called  Strong point has powerful

>> Do you mean: They are young and their attention has often been called for not following the rule.

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