Compare a paper calender and a phone calender. Which do you prefer and why?

2025-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think the phone calender is more prefer because phone calender is very relaxing. So phone calender is very relaxing.

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Compare a paper calendar and a phone calendar. Which do you prefer and why?

I think the phone calender is more prefer because phone calender is very relaxing.

So phone calender is very relaxing.

>>> I prefer using the phone calendar because it feels more relaxing.

>>> OR: I like using the phone calendar because it\'s simple and more convenient.

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