Compare City living and country living.

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There are much differences between city living and country living.

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 If we live in the city, we can enjoy the following advantages.

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 First, transportation is convenient.

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BETTER:

>> First of all, the transportation is more convenient.

Second, there are many chances of getting a job through much information.

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OR:

>> Second, there are a lot of job opportunities through much information.

Third, there are a lot of opportunities to enjoy our hobby through various social club.

>> Third, there are a lot of opportunities to enjoy our hobbies through various social clubs.

 However we must keep in mind that city life have some disadvanteges such as environmental pollution, noisy and so on.

>> However, we must keep in mind that city life has some disadvantages such as environmental and noise pollution, and so on.
 On the other hand, country living have contrary advantages to city living such as good environmental condition, easy living and so on. 

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 In conclusion, it depends on the people which life is good.

>> In conclusion, it still depends on the people which life is good for them.

If I have a chance to choose, I will choose the city living.

Because of above advanteges of city living, I prefer city living.

>> In my case, I\'d rather choose the city life/living because of the above advantages.