Compare Seoul and Busan in terms of attractions.
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Seoul has overwhelming lots of attraction and people. And Seoul is convenient for transportation, so you can travel near Seoul.
But price is high in Seoul. and Seoul hasn\'t beach.
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Hi Kevin!
Thank you for this information. It just show that every places on Earth has limitation. Just like Seoul, it is a beautiful city but th e downside of it is it\'s price. For your sentence construction. try using the pronoun (it) instead of repeating the noun :)
Have a great weekend!
Aki~
Seoul has overwhelming lots of attraction and people.
>>> Seoul has overwhelming attractions and people.
And Seoul is convenient for transportation, so you can travel near Seoul.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Transportation in Seoul is very convenient so you can travel easily within the metropolitan of Seoul.
But price is high in Seoul. and Seoul hasn\'t beach.
>>> But the price is high and it doesn\'t have a beach.
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