Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with?

2020-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

At me, I trust first impression. First impression is very important and when I judge this, surely it happens what I thought. Some people don\'t judge at first, time passes, and then get along them and judge later. Both two sides are resonable.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

At me, I trust first impression.

>>> For me, I trust my first impression.

First impression is very important and when I judge this, surely it happens what I thought.

>>> First impression is very important and when I judge, surely my thought happens.

Some people don\'t judge at first, time passes, and then get along them and judge later.

>>> Some people don\'t judge at first meeting. Time passes, and they get along with each other and judge later.

Both two sides are reasonable.

>>> Both opinions are reasonable.

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