Compare visiting a doctor in your country with what you imagine it is like in another country.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the visiting doctor in my country is more like, because visiting doctor in another country is I don\'t know talk.
So visiting doctor in my country is good for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your first revision of last week\'s homework. The corrected version appears below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Compare visiting a doctor in your country with what you imagine it is like in another country.
I think the visiting doctor in my country is more like, because visiting doctor in another country is I don\'t know talk.
>>> I think visiting the doctor in my country is better, because when I visit a doctor in another country, I don’t know how to communicate.
So visiting doctor in my country is good for me.
>>> So visiting the doctor in my country is good for me.
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