Competitive
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : [ESSAY] Are you and your friends competitive with each other? In which areas do you compete?
I compete with Anna.
We compete our physical strength and drawing skills.
We compete our physical strength with playing sports games like volleyball and basketball, etc.
We compete our drawing skills with drawing some flowers or something.
My friends and me are competitive with each other!
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Theme : [ESSAY] Are you and your friends competitive with each other? In which areas do you compete?
I compete with Anna.
>> or: I\'m competitive with my best friend, Anna.
We compete our physical strength and drawing skills.
>> We compete in our physical strength and drawing skills.
We compete our physical strength with playing sports games like volleyball and basketball, etc.
>> For instance, we compete in our physical strength when playing sports, such as volleyball, basketball, etc.
We compete our drawing skills with drawing some flowers or something.
>> Aside from this, we also compete in our drawing skills when drawing some flowers or something.
My friends and me are competitive with each other!
>> or: Indeed, my friends and I are competitive with each other, but in a healthy way!
>> or: Truthfully, my friends and I are competitive with each other, but it\'s a healthy competition.
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