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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Make a paragraph answering the following question: Would you consider undergoing plastic surgery in the future? Actually I don't think that the plastic sugery is good idea because it's very weired acting also very dangerous. I like a natural face and body. These days many people undergoing plastic surgery so there are beautiful women and handsome men many. But more and more their individual charactor is disappearing. It's a very sad situation. But, I think a plastic surgery that healing for who sick people is good idea.

Hi [이름]! Thanks again for sending in your composition! Have fun on your trip tomorrow okay? And I like and I agree with your opinion about plastic surgery. Everyone is beautiful in their own way,.

~t.Karen ^.^

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

 Make a paragraph answering the following question: Would you consider undergoing plastic surgery in the future?

 Actually I don\'t think that the plastic sugery is good idea because it\'s very weired acting also very dangerous.

>> Actually I don\'t think that plastic surgery is a good idea because it\'s a very weird act and it is also very dangerous. 

 I like a natural face and body.

>> I like a natural face and a natural body.

 These days many people undergoing plastic surgery so there are beautiful women and handsome men many.

>> These days there are many people undergoing plastic surgery so there are many beautiful women and handsome men.

But more and more their individual charactor is disappearing.

>> But more and more of their individual characteristics are disappearing.

It\'s a very sad situation.

>> Correct!

 But, I think a plastic surgery that healing for who sick people is good idea.

>> But I think plastic surgery for curing an illness is a good idea.