Complete the following sentences
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Great job in completing the sentences, Elic. You made sure that you’ve explained them u[이름]g your personal experiences which I love the most. I placed here some corrections with some simpler words to make them more concise, just like instead of u[이름]g “I really love a meat” you can use “I am a meat lover”. Also, ‘rice’ is an uncountable noun, so it’s okay not to use ‘a’ anymore. Please review my corrections carefully. Thank you very much!
Teacher Raven :)
1. I prefer to be not to be a vegetarian because I really love a meat.
>> I prefer not to be a vegetarian because I am a meat lover.
2. I\'m concerned about my diet because I got a lot of fast foods yesterday.
>> Correct.
3. I consider myself unhealthy because I\'m used to getting midnight food.
>> Correct. OR I consider myself unhealthy because I\'m used to eating food even at midnight.
4. I think a rice is the best kind of meal because it has many nutrients.
>> I think any meal with rice is the best kind of meal because it has many nutrients.
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