Complieting of sentence~!

2013-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I left early because I have to finish somthing to work. It was very expensive, but it was worth the cost. They never come on time , so I refer to discuss about making the rules of time and promise. There was train strike, so I should to drive every commute but I can understand them and I pary for their good life. I'll do it when I have the license of supervisor in couseling and I start the course of PH. D. It is opening my center of psychotherpy.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms [이름]^^ How are you doing? Please take it easy T^T You must be tired studying most of the time T^T Take a rest if you must *_* Stay beautiful! Complieting of sentence~! >>Completing sentences~! I left early because I have to finish somthing to work.>>I left early because I have to finish something at work.It was very expensive, but it was worth the cost.>>CORRECT!They never come on time , so I refer to discuss about making the rules of time and promise.>>They never come on time, so I suggest to discuss with them the rules of time and appointment.There was train strike, so I should to drive every commute but I can understand them and I pary for their good life.>>There was train strike, so I should drive to my destination; however,  I can understand the people and I pray for their good life.I\'ll do it when I have the license of supervisor in couseling and I start the course of PH. D. >>I\'ll do it when I have the license as a supervisor in couseling and start the course of Ph. D. It is opening my center of psychotherpy. >>It will be opening my clinic/ center for psychotherapy.

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