composition - cell phone use

We cannot imagine how our life is without the mobile phone. It is obvious that the mobile phone gives us a lot of benefits in some aspects of life, but it also causes many problems. Today, people especially young generation are becoming addicted to using the mobile phone. They cannot stay away from their phones even for a minute. The cell phone use has effects on the direct human to human interaction. Talking on the cell phones is gradually replacing the communication face to face between people. You can easily notice that some people even between friends are sitting in the café with playing or looking at their smart phones without talking each other. Even at the dinner table, farther, mother, and children are checking their phones without engaging in talks. It seems that using cell phones too much destroys the pleasure of direct interaction. Using a mobile phone for a long time affects our health. The waves from cell phones are harmful to our physical bodies.

Hi there SiR [이름]^^ AMAZING essay! Thank you for sending this in. Your opinions are greatly appreciated. You were able to share your thoughts well and you elaborated a lot of things. Great job! I do agree with you that using mobile phones has an advantage and disadvantage too. Let\'s talk more about this in class. IF you have any questions, just feel free to ask me in class. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina We cannot imagine how our life is without the mobile phone. >> We cannot imagine how our life is without mobile phone. It is obvious that the mobile phone gives us a lot of benefits in some aspects of life, but it also causes many problems. >> Correct! OR >> It is obvious that the mobile phone gives us a lot of benefits in some aspects of life, but it also causes a lot of problems. Today, people especially young generation are becoming addicted to using the mobile phone. >> Nowadays, people especially the young generation are becoming addicted using mobile phone. They cannot stay away from their phones even for a minute. >> Correct! The cell phone use has effects on the direct human to human interaction. >> Cell phone has effects on humans and the way they interact. Talking on the cell phones is gradually replacing the communication face to face between people. >> Talking using cellphone gradually replaces the communication wherein people communicates face to face. OR >> Talking using monile phones gradually replaces the interpersonal communication between people. You can easily notice that some people even between friends are sitting in the café with playing or looking at their smart phones without talking each other. >> You can easily notice that some people even friends are sitting at a cafeteria while playing or looking at their smart phones without talking. OR >> You can easily notice that some people even friends are sitting at a cafeteria while playing or looking at their smart phones without having a conversation. Even at the dinner table, farther, mother, and children are checking their phones without engaging in talks. >> Even at the dinner table, the father, mother, and children are checking their phones without engaging in talks. OR >> Even when having dinner, the family emmbers checks their mobile phone without having a conversation. It seems that using cell phones too much destroys the pleasure of direct interaction. >> It seems that using cell phone too much destroys the pleasure of interaction between people. Using a mobile phone for a long time affects our health. >> Correct! The waves from cell phones are harmful to our physical bodies. >> The waves from cell phones are harmful to our body. OR >> The radaition waves from mobile phones are harmful to our body..