Composition - Organ Donation

Being honest, I do not have courage at this moment to donate my kidney, liver or another vital organ to save others. I think every person would have the same feeling just like me, but a situation may make me change my current posture. One of my colleagues’ wives has been recently infected with acute hepatitis after traveling to East Asian countries. She might have eaten unsanitary foods. She was hospitalized and faced death or life situation and only treaty to save her was to transplant the liver. Her condition was so serious that she could not wait until her turn to get a donated liver so her younger sister had to donate part of her liver to her sister. Although in general most people and countries support the donation as a charitable act of great benefit to the community, ccertain groups, like the Roma(gypsies), oppose organ donation on religious grounds.

Hi there again Sir [이름]^^ I am very happy to see the great improvement you showed in your writing skill. ^^ You improved a lot.^^ I do understand your stand. I believe that every person will have the same opinion about this question. it is really difficult to wait for a donor unless one of your signinfacnt others will be the one who will help you. A lot of people are still waiting for the chance for them to be save by other people. We should take good care of ourselves always. Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you! Teacher Nina Being honest, I do not have courage at this moment to donate my kidney, liver or another vital organ to save others. >> Honestly, I do not have the courage at this moment to donate my kidney, liver or any other vital organ to save others. I think every person would have the same feeling just like me, but a situation may make me change my current posture. >> I think every person would have the same feeling just like me, but a situation might change my perspective. One of my colleagues’ wives has been recently infected with acute hepatitis after traveling to East Asian countries. >> One of my colleagues\' wife has been recently infected with acute hepatitis after traveling to East Asian countries. She might have eaten unsanitary foods. >> Correct! She was hospitalized and faced death or life situation and only treaty to save her was to transplant the liver. >> She was hospitalized and faced a life and death situation and the only treatment to save her was to underfo a liver transplant. OR >> She was hospitalized and her conditon became critical that the only way to save her was for her to have a liver transplant. Her condition was so serious that she could not wait until her turn to get a donated liver so her younger sister had to donate part of her liver to her sister. >> Her condition was so serious that she could not wait for her turn to receive a liver from a donor so her younger sister donated a part of her liver to her sister. Although in general most people and countries support the donation as a charitable act of great benefit to the community, ccertain groups, like the Roma(gypsies), oppose organ donation on religious grounds. >> Although in general most people and countries support the donation as a charitable act of great benefit to the community, certain groups, like the Roma (gypsies), oppose organ donation on religious grounds.