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2012-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I have some questions about invoice of Dec. I received the list of in transit from Panalpina transportation corporation. Please see the list of in transit that didn't contain in your check list. It means 11BKTUBE1226 ,11BKTUBE1226 and 11BKL431126 of invoices are already in transit. But there are no datas in Bellin. Would you please check again and please answer me that I have to contain this invoice in Dec closing or not. Thank you for your help.

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Hi there,          Good afternoon! Here are my corrections for you. Please be guided. See you!  Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectGood afternoon! >>CorrectI have some questions about invoice of Dec.>>I have some questions for December invoice.I received the list of in transit from Panalpina transportation corporation.>>Correct Please see the list of in transit that didn\'t contain in your check list.>>Please see the list of the transit that are not listed in your check list.It means 11BKTUBE1226 ,11BKTUBE1226 and 11BKL431126 are already in the transit. >>CorrectBut there are no datas in Bellin. >>CorrectWould you please check again and please answer me that I have to contain this invoice in Dec closing or not.>>Would you please check it again and tell me if I have to indicate this invoice for the end of December or not.Thank you for your help. >>Correct

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