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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Thank you for your cooperation.
First of all, we have to attached the details to invoice of development in order to evidence for not withholding tax.
If we should pay for development costs, we have to know correct information which order used it and order type and more.
Please let me know after confirming your side as below Mr. [Name]'s e-mail.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella! Thank you for sharing me your composition. I appreciated it. Anyway, I will talk to you on Monday so this is it for now. Enjoy your weekend my dear!
-Teacher Chloe
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>CorrectThank you for your cooperation.
>CorrectFirst of all, we have to attached the details to invoice of development in order to evidence for not withholding tax.
>> First of all, we have to attach the details of invoice of development as an evidence for not withholding tax.
If we should pay for development costs, we have to know correct information which order used it and order type and more.
>> If we should pay for development costs, we have to know correct information in orderfor us to know more about it.
Please let me know after confirming your side as below Mr. [Name]\'s e-mail.
>>Please let me know about your decision.I\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>CorrectThank you for your help.
>>Correct
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