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2012-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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We agree that Balance at 30.Nov.2011 of 169,465.80Euro and sorting fee 162.56Euro. But we don't agree that your sales of 901,080.18Euro from1.Jan.2011 to 30. Nov.2011. Our data is 901,609.38Euro from1.Jan.2011 to 30. Nov.2011. Please see the attached details and check the invoice of 529.20Euro.( The invoice number is 1110701.)

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Hello Bella!  Here is my corrections my dear.  Just check it out! I will talk to you later. Good afternoon! -Teacher Chloe   We agree that Balance at 30.Nov.2011 of 169,465.80Euro and sorting fee 162.56Euro. >>We agree that our balance as of Nov. 30, 2011 is at 169,465.80 Euro and sorting fee is 162.56 Euro.But we don\'t agree that your sales of 901,080.18Euro from1.Jan.2011 to 30. Nov.2011. >>But we don't agree that your sales from Jan. 1, 2011 to Nov. 30, 2011 is only 901,080.18 Euro.Our data is 901,609.38Euro from1.Jan.2011 to 30. Nov.2011. >>Our data is stating that our total sales from Jan. 1, 2011 to Nov. 30, 2011 is 901,609.38 Euro.Please see the attached details and check the invoice of 529.20Euro. (The invoice number is 1110701.) >> Please see the attached details and check the invoice of 529.20Euro. (The invoice number is 1110701.)

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