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Dear [Name], Good afternoon! I want to composition more courteous expression. Here are sentense for composition. Thank you! Dear [Name]. [Name], How was your vacation? I hope that you had a great time. Last month, we prepared farewell gift for Ms. [Name]. The farewell gift was 100,000KRW of gift certificate of Lotte department store. I would like to inform you that share amount for gift for Ms.An. Mr. [Name]------->30,000KRW f you can't agree about your share amount please feel free to contact me. Otherwise, would you please give me 30,000KRW by cash? If you have question please give me a call. Thank you for your help.

Hello Bella!  Here are my corrections!  Please check it and you have any questions feel free to ask me in our class. Okay? Take care my dear! -Teacher Chloe Dear [Name], >>CorrectGood afternoon! >>Correct I want to composition more courteous expression. >>I want to have a composition with more courteous expression.Here are sentense for composition. >>Here are my sentences for the composition. Thank you! >CorrectDear Mr. [Name], >>CorrectHow was your vacation? >>Correct I hope that you had a great time. >>Correct >>I hope you had a great time.Last month, we prepared farewell gift for Ms. [Name]. >>Last month, we prepared a farewell gift for Ms. [Name]. >> Last month, we prepared a present gift for Ms. [Name] farewell gift was 100,000KRW of gift certificate of Lotte department store.>> Correct I would like to inform you that share amount for gift for Ms.An. >>I would like to inform you your share for the gift. Mr. [Name]------->30,000KRW >> I would like to inform you that your share for the present is 30,000KRW. f you can\'t agree about your share amount please feel free to contact me. >>If don't agree with the given amount please feel free to contact me.Otherwise, would you please give me 30,000KRW by cash? >>Otherwise, if you would agree please hand me in the given amount in cash if it is fine with you Sir.If you have question please give me a call. >>Give me a ring if you have questions with regards to this matter.Thank you for your help. >>Correct