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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I have a question about TNT voucher of 19,520KRW.
The description says "Documents sent to Belgium (Vanbreda INTL)"
Can I ask what about documents?
Now, your prepare the voucher's account is 45200440( Freight out).
It will be change the account to 45100600 (Postage Fees)according what about documents.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you !
강사 첨삭
Bella! Here are my corrections again my dear. Thank you for sharing me your compositions. I will talk to you later.
-Teacher Chloe
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>CorrectGood afternoon!
>>CorrectI have a question about TNT voucher of 19,520KRW.>> I have a question about the TNT voucher of 19,520KRW.The description says \"Documents sent to Belgium (Vanbreda INTL)\"
>> The description says \"Documents sent to Belgium (Vanbreda INTL)\".Can I ask what about documents?
>>Can I ask about the documents?Now, your prepare the voucher\'s account is 45200440( Freight out).
>>The prepared voucher\'s account is 45200440 (Freight out).It will be change the account to 45100600 (Postage Fees)according what about documents.
>>However, there will be change for the account. It will be changed to 45100600 (Postage Fees) according to the documents.I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>Correct
>>I will be waiting for your reply.Thank you !
>>Thank you.
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