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2012-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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1. plenty From 6PM to 7PM, it's better not using the personal car or taxi. Because It's time that the almost company finished and very plenty cars out. 2. bear The way go to the company is cold, but I bear everyday in the winter. 3. recommend When the other people ask to know someone well known computer, I recommend my friend. 4. distribute When i was children, My sister was used to distribute things recieved. 5. hunger I am very hunger. because my home is far from my office, i can have the dinner after taking and arriving for one   and half hour .

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan, You did a great job answering your homework. I hope you will continue doing this so that even if we do not see each other in class you are still learning English. Please be aware of the corrections you have and notice how it is put in a sentence. See you tomorrow! T.Faye Here are your corrections: 1.plentyFrom 6PM to 7PM, it\'s better not using the personal car or taxi. Because It\'s time that the almost company finished and very plenty cars out. >>From 6 pm to 7 pm, it's better not to use a personal car or taxi because this is the time when almost all the companies are finished with work and there are plenty cars on the street.2. bearThe way go to the company is cold, but I bear everyday in the winter. >>It is always cold when I am on my way to the company, but I could bear with the weather everyday.3. recommendWhen the other people ask to know someone well known computer, I recommend my friend. >>When other people ask me if I know a person who can fix a computer, I recommend my friend.4. distributeWhen i was children, My sister was used to distribute things recieved.>>When I was a child, my sister used to distribute things she receives. 5. hungerI am very hunger. because my home is far from my office, i can have the dinner after taking and arriving for one   and half hour . >>My home is far from my office, I can only eat dinner when I arrive home after one and a half hour so I always feel the hunger.  

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