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Dear [Name],
Good morning!
I want to add the explain about due date for the invoice of 18462331.
As you know, we've pay to intercompany once a month on 22th.
The prepared invoice's net due date is 2012.01.01.
So we expect to do a payment for below open invoice on 19th of Jan.2012.
Please refer to this e-mail for next payment date.
Thank you.
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Here are my corrections:
Dear [Name],Good morning!I want to add the explain about due date for the invoice of 18462331.
>> I want to add an explanation about the due date for the invoice of 18462331.As you know, we\'ve pay to intercompany once a month on 22th.
>> As you know, we pay the intercompnay once a month, every 22th.The prepared invoice\'s net due date is 2012.01.01.
>> Correct!So we expect to do a payment for below open invoice on 19th of Jan.2012.
>> So we expect to do a payment for the invoice on the 19th of January 2012.Please refer to this e-mail for next payment date.
>> Please refer to this email for the next paym,ent date.
Thank you.
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