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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
I prepared list of frame work order after confirming the person in charge.
Please see the attached file.
The year (KRW) colum is total amount each costs in 2012 year.
Panalpina of duty also include in this list and we have to pay duty and tax until this Friday.
It means I need PO number of frame work order for duty of panalpina.
Please let me know next step.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher Chloe
Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectI prepared list of frame work order after confirming the person in charge.
>> I prepared a list of frame work order after confirming with the person in charge.Please see the attached file.
>> Please check the attached file.The year (KRW) colum is total amount each costs in 2012 year.
>> The year (KRW) column is the total amount cost in 2012 year.Panalpina of duty also include in this list and we have to pay duty and tax until this Friday.
>> Panalpina of duty is also included in the list and we have to pay duty and tax until Friday.It means I need PO number of frame work order for duty of panalpina.
>> It means I need PO number for the frame work order for the duty of panalpina.Please let me know next step.
>>Please let me know our next step.Thank you for your help.
>>Correct
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