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2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! The USERIDs are data of 2011 when we start frame work order. Please see the column of "Responsible". I will change the responable in my side the "Telecommunication costs". Can I ask Who is responsible for wireless internet charge of Mr. [Name], Mr.Son,Mr.Lee and Mobile phone charge of Mr. [Name],Mr. [Name]? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for your composition today. Take note of the corrections that I made. Have a great day. Dear [Name]. [Name], >> Correct!Good morning!>>Correct! The USERIDs are data of 2011 when we start frame work order. >> The USER IDs are data of 2011 when we started frame work order.Please see the column of \"Responsible\".>> Please check the column \"responsible\" I will change the responable in my side the \"Telecommunication costs\".>> I will change the column responsible to \"Telecommunication Costs\' Can I ask Who is responsible for wireless internet charge of Mr. [Name], Mr.Son,Mr.Lee and Mobile phone charge of Mr. [Name],Mr. [Name]?>> Can I ask who is the person responsible for  charging the wireless internet of Mr. [Name], Mr. [Name], Mr. [Name] and mobile phone charge of Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name].  I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>Correct!

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