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2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good Afternoon! Sorry for below my e-mail. It was my mistake. Actually, this e-mail was not completed. I don't know how to sent you e-mail, I think sent an e-mail to you before be wirte completed sentense. I will go to your desk to receive your approval about the frame work order after finish your meeting. I'm sorry again!!

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Hello there my dear!  Here are my corrections. Please check it out! I will talk to you later. Take care! Hugs and kisses! -Teacher Chloe   Dear [Name]. [Name], >>CorrectGood Afternoon! >>CorrectSorry for below my e-mail. It was my mistake.>>I apologize for the mistake on this e-mail.Actually, this e-mail was not completed. >>Actually, this e-mail is not complete.I don\'t know how to sent you e-mail, I think sent an e-mail to you before be wirte completed sentense. >>I don't know how I sent you the email. I think I sent you the e-mail before I completed it.I will go to your desk to receive your approval about the frame work order after finish your meeting. >>I will be on your desk after your meeting to receive your approval about the frame work order.I\'m sorry again!! >>I am really sorry.  

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