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2012-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I received the confirmation for Account Balance at 30 Nov.2011. Please check the attached file. We do not agree with the BHTC Shanghai accounts Sales(901,080.18Euro). Please check the attached our records. Can we return letter to Ernst & young with disagreed or can you check again? If you want to send the confirmation letter to Ernst & young with disagreed or not. Please send me an e- mail. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hello Dear Thank you for making a composition. I really appreciate it. See you later. T.Chloe Here are your corrections: Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!I received the confirmation for Account Balance at 30 Nov.2011. >>I received the confirmation of the Account Balance last 30 Nov. 2011.Please check the attached file. >>Correct!We do not agree with the BHTC Shanghai accounts Sales(901,080.18Euro). >>Correct!Please check the attached our records. >>Please check also the attached records.Can we return letter to Ernst & young with disagreed or can you check again? >>Can we return the letter to Ernst & Young with a disagreement or will you check it again?If you want to send the confirmation letter to Ernst & young with disagreed or not. >>Would you prefer to sent the letter with a disagreement ornot.Please send me an e- mail. >>Correct!I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>Correct!Thank you. >>Correct!  

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